Introduction
General statement:
The high unemployment rate has drawn great attention of the whole society in Australia. As the number of Australia’s unemployment rate has just exceeded 6% for the first time in a decade, which is causing the damage to the Australian families.
Thesis statement:
In order to minimize the damage, people suggest that the federal government should reduce the number of migrants allowed to settle in Australian. However, some other people do not think this method is proper. This essay will discuss about whether the federal government should reduce the number of migrants allowed to settle in Australia by two sides.
Body
Paragraph 1(topic sentence/ for):
The migrant rate is very high in Australia, which means that there are more people choose to live and work in Australia.
Supporting points:
The statistics indicate that the migrants’ unemployment rate is high than the local people, which means that the migrant has taken more job opportunities in Australia. As a result, the federal government should reduce the number of migrants allowed to settle in Australia.
Paragraph 2(topic sentence/for):
The federal government of Australia should reduce the number of migrants, which can give the local people more opportunities to find jobs.
Supporting points:
The local people find it difficult for them to find jobs, because there are so many migrants around them. Some of the industries in Australia have not change their forms, which mean that there are no more jobs offer for the migrants.
Paragraph 3(topic sentence/ against):
According to the statistics, the migrant is not the main reason which leads to the high unemployment rate in Australian.
Supporting points:
According to the analysis, the mining is the pillar industry in Australia. In recent years, the mining cooling is the main cause of the higher unemployment in Australia. Therefore, it will not make a great change if the federal government reduces the number of migrants allowed to settle in Australia.
Paragraph 4(topic sentence/ against):
Some experts indicate that the federal government should transform the existing industries and develop some new economic growth aspects to reduce the high unemployment.
Supporting points:
This means that the migrant is not the main method to solve the high unemployment in Australian. The government has planned to begin some Infrastructure construction to offer job opportunities for unemployed residents. So the federal government need’s reduce the number of migrants allowed to settle in Australia.
Conclusion
In order to minimize the damage, some people agree to reduce the migrants allowed to settle in Australian. However, some other people do not agree with this suggestion, because they think that the migrant is not the main reason for the high unemployment in Australia. Both of their supporting points are reasonable. I think that the federal government of Australian can find some more useful methods to solve this problem in the following years.
Final thought:
For this high unemployment, everyone in Australia has the responsibilities to reduce the high rate.
